tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8646055206894545539.post4534630927008414596..comments2019-11-09T16:16:09.011-05:00Comments on Rogues Retreat: Dishonour, Chapter 9Roguehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14865195377873721939noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8646055206894545539.post-26932868098153937472009-06-14T12:18:17.850-04:002009-06-14T12:18:17.850-04:00What a lovely compliment Rebecca. Thank you. I'...What a lovely compliment Rebecca. Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying it. The next chapter is almost done.Roguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14865195377873721939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8646055206894545539.post-34108597324989242042009-06-13T19:25:36.443-04:002009-06-13T19:25:36.443-04:00Andrew, this excerpt had me engaged from the first...Andrew, this excerpt had me engaged from the first word. I was disappointed when it ended. I have to make some time to go back and get acquainted in prior posts with these characters. Very interesting story and waiting to see where you are taking this.rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18248554235709475320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8646055206894545539.post-69590814908606013692009-05-29T09:14:49.560-04:002009-05-29T09:14:49.560-04:00Thank you Ananji. Yes, I agree. Brainstorming is t...Thank you Ananji. Yes, I agree. Brainstorming is the best! I will try to keep it coming.Roguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14865195377873721939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8646055206894545539.post-23303829348514300852009-05-28T17:52:02.261-04:002009-05-28T17:52:02.261-04:00I liked the line, "pangs of guilt at her brutal ba...I liked the line, "pangs of guilt at her brutal barrage on him last night haunted her." The conflict in her mind before and after. Interesting. <br /><br />Love some of your word choices. Don't you love when you're writing along brainstorming, then magically a better, more descriptive term jumps into your mind?!! I love moments like that. "Damn, I'm brilliant!"<br /><br />Nice writing... story's coming along.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8646055206894545539.post-72899866086260039342009-05-25T14:56:36.545-04:002009-05-25T14:56:36.545-04:00“I want the reader to know that in spite of her an...“I want the reader to know that in spite of her angry side, there is also a vulnerable side to her.”--- Yes – you’ve done this well! I think it ‘opens out’ her character and reflects the reality and complexities of human nature (and experiences) as we are not one-dimensional.<br /><br />“...I had you in mind when I wrote this paragraph...”--- Oh – I am chuffed (I’m a reader helping to shape ‘great’ narrative :)CathMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14143141734424055810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8646055206894545539.post-16054643150280953572009-05-25T14:43:34.759-04:002009-05-25T14:43:34.759-04:00Thank you Cath. I had you in mind when I wrote thi...Thank you Cath. I had you in mind when I wrote this paragraph as you had mentioned in an earlier comment about wanting to know more about her. I want the reader to know that in spite of her angry side, there is also a vulnerable side to her. I really don't want to give away too much just now, but Loryann is far from over in this novel. In fact, it's just beginning. Unfortunately, yiou will simply have to wait and see:-) As for Alex; he is indeed a major character in this piece. You will see much more of him as the story unfolds and his connection to Loryann. Again, all in due time. As for Stan, Alex is waiting on an important phone call from him; a call that might shift the balance in the upcoming Democratic nominations. Again tho,, in due time:-)Roguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14865195377873721939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8646055206894545539.post-33998893715813261332009-05-25T13:42:17.675-04:002009-05-25T13:42:17.675-04:00Andrew, I’ve really enjoyed reading this. It’s gre...Andrew, I’ve really enjoyed reading this. It’s great the way you’ve given us some insight into Loryanne’s character... helping us (as readers) to connect to her... and, feel some empathy for her as we realise that something bloody awful happened to her that made her the person she has become. I’m intrigued by Alex and how you are going to develop his role in the narrative. It feels like he is going to be a major player in the story. Now, I wonder - why he must ‘call Stan’. Super plotting and penning :)CathMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14143141734424055810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8646055206894545539.post-90292453132538643992009-05-23T14:41:25.043-04:002009-05-23T14:41:25.043-04:00Awww,, thank you Bilbo:-)Awww,, thank you Bilbo:-)Roguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14865195377873721939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8646055206894545539.post-10808945165632401412009-05-23T13:49:39.001-04:002009-05-23T13:49:39.001-04:00Very enjoyable Rogue :D
BilboVery enjoyable Rogue :D<br /><br />BilboBilbonoreply@blogger.com